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May 30, 2014
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Point of View
I stood there with you
Looking out of your window
It was bright for me
— Ian.T, May 30, 2014
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Points of view (Senyru) for those hat only see the dark out there..
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Critiques
weirdelf
12 years 1 month ago
suberb senryu
it was bright for me too.
Ian.T
12 years 1 month ago
Jess
That the view from your window was bright was good for me to hear, take care young traveller,
Yours Ian.T
Emina Smajevic
12 years 1 month ago
so so good :))
so so good :))
Ian.T
12 years 1 month ago
Emina
Never let others darken your view, thanks for your visit,
Yours as always Ian.T
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