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Poetry Shoes
Poetry shoes,
kinda flashy, it's what I choose,
made in Guatamala,
by some poor seamster fella,
the colours of it's outer skin,
stir strange thoughts from deep with-in,
from the depths of my mind,
only to find,
they got me on the go,
as my words start to flow,
to new homes whoever will hear,
many pass by, my words may bring a tear,
or a smile from a memory past,
as good feelings get cast.
Well I just love my poetry shoes,
there se fine and they come in two's!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Last few words:
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Comments
IRiz
Sun, 2018-05-20 20:55
cool shoes, march on!
cool shoes, march on!
IRiz
Rula
Tue, 2018-05-22 03:24
seems what I need
to have. I wonder how can I get one myself.
Awesome!
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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trekker
Wed, 2018-05-23 02:07
Poetry Shoes
Rula you can buy them at the Heritage Days Festival Edmonton where I bought my Nigerian shirt, made in Tailand shirt. I also thought my shoes were made in Nigeria but I guess they have gotten into outsourcing their products too. Glad you enjoyed!