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Poetry and Grammar

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Friend your article comes
a century too late
I'm a distinction holder in Literature

Grammar a big Zero

they had to pass me
how?
now you know
so I switched on to poetry
with all its
glow
flow
slow
and dough
I’d let grammar down the Thames flow
MY HERE MY GRAMMAR
does go
and
here I too go

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

that since you can't write English you write poetry.
A poor excuse.

cheers,
Jess
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You emulate their style badly,
but I will give you this, when you're good your are very very good. Unlike monanagics who could'nt write a good verse to to save her life. Tho poor bitch thought this was a social site,

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

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