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A Poet
To play with words Is my delight
To say some things so they come out right.
Words run on and over the page
Like dancers and actors across a stage.
But when it's over and the curtain comes down,
People may stop and laugh or frown.
The thought was there for all to see
And behind the thought, there's someone called me.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Comments
lovedly
Sat, 2017-01-14 13:53
beautiful maiden poetry
that I did read
coming from the pen
of an old USA lady
I think more than poetry
experience speaks
I am not entitled to
but I 'd like to Welcome you
milady!!!
your poetry
speaks
lovedly
once i was
loved
valene
Sun, 2017-01-15 12:30
Hi poet
This was a lovely read. It has an even flow making it an easy read. I think you've described your title in a well conceived way. You've also given a bit of insight into you.
Long story short, nicely penned!
valene
WonderWoods
Sun, 2017-01-15 12:47
Many Thanks
Your comments, Lovedly and Valene, warm the cockles of my heart. It feels good to have others read and enjoy my work. Many, many thanks!!
author commentEsker
Sun, 2017-01-15 13:43
always love the witty and self preserved
i get a happiness from this poem
and \i like that \u forward your own self
that self assuredness
many dont have it
though they may have riches beyond
saw this....the me they never could
find value in...
sad...they missed the most important
aspect about being
beautiful poem
well crafted
light and lyrical
\thank \u wonderwoods
mr wolf
Tater Tot
Sat, 2017-02-18 14:53
A Poet
I enjoyed it very much. I must follow ur work.
Sparrow
Sun, 2017-02-19 18:53
To a Lady
Lovely write smooth and easy to read..
Welcome to our poetry place, I hope that your journey with us will be great for all of us.
I will talk tomorrow on other things but today you made me smile so I shall stay as that,
Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
nokros
Thu, 2017-03-02 15:40
enjoyed
your writing. carry on