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The Plumber Man
And what can we do when the plumber man comes
hide children hide
your walls won’t protect you now
Tap, tap, tap
Goes the pipe against the wall
Stand tall young one
stand tall
The plumber man does smirk
Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
tell mummy that he’s here
thump, thump, thump
goes his footsteps down the hall
too small young one
too small
daddys’ home
and the plumber mans dead
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2015-06-06 19:08
um ahhh
A cautionary tale?
Scary story for kiddies?
Deconstructionist allegory?
I don't know, but it works.
cheers,
Jess
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Sparrow
Sat, 2015-06-06 19:12
Nick
Are you trying to scare me I is in my second childhood so please no more scary stuff.
Liked it though..
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