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Pinball Wizard
I am like a pinball machine
My brain, my heart
The ball
All life’s different facets,
Like bumpers
On the wall
The flippers are my will
The way it rebounds,
Chance
The soundtrack and
The sound effects,
The universal dance
And when I hit my target
I add more to
My points!
But when I get distracted
Or stiffness
In my joints
The ball goes tumbling
Down the drain
And I must start again
But I don’t have to
Treat myself
With critical disdain
Cause there are many
Chances
To master my technique
To get to know
The world around
To find as well as seek
Who knows
I could end up in
The pinball hall of fame
Life seems so very
Serious
But really it’s a game
I am like a pinball machine
My mind, my heart
The ball
And I will give my best
As long
As I’m plugged into the wall
Comments
tyro
Wed, 2018-07-04 02:50
wow, greg
wow, greg
you are just full of ideas. I have read all of your poems and the diversity is amazing.
I really like this one, the associations throughout.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
gregwa8
Wed, 2018-07-04 20:03
thanks, tyro! I try to keep
thanks, tyro! I try to keep it interesting, out of the box, be a jack-of-all-subjects. thanks so much for all the reads!
greg
Rula
Wed, 2018-07-04 08:58
greg
well use of simile. l especially liked the repetition of
"I am like a pinball machine
My mind, my heart
The ball"
the uplifting thoughts never disappoint.
Thank you for sharing.
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gregwa8
Wed, 2018-07-04 20:04
glad I can uplift, rula!
glad I can uplift, rula! thanks for your kind comment
greg