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Picasso's Blue
like a cardinal
in a world of white
your heart
in this frozen place
you are a fire
with wings
the painter's
favorite color
Van Gogh's yellow
or Picasso's blue
the top point
of the golden triangle
at least in my world
you are the star
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Geezer
Tue, 2019-05-07 18:04
I like this...
The title is good, it drew me in. Very good visuals, I particularly like the "you are a fire with wings".
I can relate to the colors being like moods. I think I remember a famous artist being in a "Blue Mood"? Was that Picasso? ~ Geezer.
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