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Pastoral poem

A cool summer rain is a blessing,
a panacea.
A wild winter wind is a cursing,
a cursing of God.
A warm autumn gale is relieving
from mad summer heat.
Spring has a special breeze sent from that God-
a cool summer rain.

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This is drivel and we all know it. Pastoral and I don't get along.
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The last two lines could use a bit of work. As they are you state that a breeze is a cool summer rain. Would it be more correct to say a breeze as in a cool summer rain or a breeze within a cool summer rain or some such?

But I would make the first two verses the last two
Love judy

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

so you can be brief and to the point when you like to.
I loved this one. succinct and sweet.
I especially loved panancea... long since last time I heard it.
Thanks for sharing.


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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