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Passing by

Everyday passing by
Going tik tok
Playing face, telling lies
Give mock
Never coming near don't
Ring ring
Don't knock

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Welcome to your first piece, you have been a member for quite a while now, so it is good that you have at last streamed some writing for us to see. I hope you don't pass us by again good theme just needs more of you, Yours ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

ttrying to make sense or control
my thoughts..
and i thought of digital
the comp language..

this language..
then i thought of the one being raised the zero
laying flat....which is physical formed way of
this being read on applications

which means..

i am listening to rap now
because you can challenge
in a much more intelligent
way then just the basic metaldeath
music that i like and enjoy

but rap is deeper
and poetic..

like shakeasperes
and characters
in intense emotional
exchanges can

there a duel

there is great beauty
in this..
the intensity is like a soft
amaazing blast

like a comet ..

thank you

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