I see you're from Romania, so the use of your English threw me off for a few lines.

After I overlooked the inaccuracies in the words you used, I must admit this is lovely.... I gotta say, that the world wide web would've been really beneficial in your choice of words for this poem. But English is a terribly difficult language to master....

So here's my personal changes that I would make:

1. Visionaries should be visions
2. Means of transportation should be mode of transportation
3. Medicals sounds a bit odd, possibly switched to doctors
4. Wait tomorrow, should be wait till tomorrow.... and possibly put another day on a separate line
5. Did not let, should be won't let the Drs
6. Who really that can say, should be who can really say that

Overall, I really like this. You did a great job putting your thoughts out there. And I totally love the way you made my imagination take over.

Try changing around some words when you edit this, Google can be your friend in helping you understand the difference in some English words! Just keep on keeping on.... You have the right idea!!

I see that you have gotten some good advice from Miranda and you've implemented those changes. Good on ya.

One part of this poem I can't wrap my mind around is: " solde(Frenchy)"

I don't know if you're trying to tell the reader that you're spelling solde with an "e" at the end to create a French effect, or something else. If you could clarify, I'd appreciate it and I'd be able to give some suggestions.

Kelsey

Lovedly, you're revision has made this even more amazing. Great job! It flows ever so smoothly. For what it's worth, the solde I didn't mention because you'd already explained your motive in using it that way. The E isn't distracting to me, so I let it be.

Have an amazing day!! :)