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OUR COMBINED MEMORIES September Contest.....

all human creation
both saw
with wide opened eyes

what a difference

apples bananas snakes
peaches oranges
who could ever make mistakes

none even till today
so we all continue to say

repeat it every day
heavens still relay

both have been placed
equal now all say
first come first served
Queen or King

man woman
woe of men
since ages
till ages ever
only born
no dye

in memories lanes we all lay
come over any day
happily recall the gone days

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Hello, Lovedly.
Your title suggests that you've combined poems from Neo, correct? Very interesting! There are a few words that perplex me, but "first come, first served" stands out the most. Your final stanza is sweet and relatable.
Thank you!

first come first served
(BE_) Queen or King

And Lav
I read across the globe
so I freely compose..

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and most if not all have similar
memorable delights
am I not right
never mind
no plight no fight no flight
only memory is

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