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Nix The Dynomometer

Submitted by brittle light on Sat, 2016-05-07 23:58

Her chassis sway
can't be duplicated
or deconstructed
or impersonated.

Reverse engineering,
kinesthetics,
or computer modeling
still don't get it.

She owns it,
she knows it,
and uses it to her delight,

knowing damn well it's delighting everyone else too.

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Keith Logan

Mon, 2016-05-09 10:49

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but maybe not quite everyone, just every male.

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brittle light

Wed, 2016-05-11 03:50

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thanks Keith
I think females also take delight, but sometime just mask it well with other covering reactions.
... not much negative attitudes from females toward Marilyn Monroe, or Gina Lollobrigida...and, man, could they sway and sashay!

(yup, the examples are from from the era of my youth!)

Al

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Keith Logan

Wed, 2016-05-11 04:09

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When it's screen goddesses they can desire to emulate them but when closer to home?

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