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Night

Submitted by Kent on Wed, 2018-08-29 12:37

The night is dark and full of Terrors
Spreads the mischief of darkness
You that harbour evil and cast
Away light even with it's regal position
Even The Shadow's are frightened!

Night
Evil you hold dear
You pushed The Stars far away
And evil deeds you embrace!
Your presence be felt everywhere.

Night,night
Reveal yourself and let
Light take darkness as it's protege.

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Free verse
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Comments

Shadowdancer3349

Sun, 2018-09-16 09:19

Such a dark serious poem the word mischief seems to light and airy for the rest of the work which I found that you brought your point across very well with your words

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