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NEWS (North East South West)
Venomous blackguard
Abets aggressive diehard
Unbalanced retard
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Political pressures prevent principled promoters pushing proactive peaceful progressive priorities
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Geezer
Sat, 2018-04-07 13:23
Just thought...
I would pop in to let you know, that I always read these. I originally started to read them just because I wondered if they made sense. Now I read them as though I would a favorite cartoon in the news paper. I love the intrinsic way that most of them describe a situation or particular type of personality.
i truly wish that you could be persuaded to write some rhyming poetry. I know that if you had the rhythm down, you could make some really great rhyme. Anyhow, just thought I would let you know. ~ Geezer.
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OriginalRhyku
Sat, 2018-04-07 19:16
Geezer
Thanks for your gracious comments. I will submit a rhyming poem soon although all three lines of my Rhykus should rhyme all the time.
author commentGeezer
Mon, 2018-04-09 01:19
I see that...
they do and what I meant; was to have more than a Rhyku. Maybe like a couple of quatrains?
~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2018-04-09 08:54
Geezer
Your wish is my command. Please review my latest offering - Estate Distaste
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