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New Moral Order:
Related fundamentalism
Hands off or no hands absurdism
Counterproductive savagism
The calling card of extremism
Voyeurism wrong, spying divine
Stealing tort, usurping in line
Assault misdeed, torture benign
Killing crime, massacre is fine
Governments that indoctrinate
Some states falsely incriminate
Other regimes invalidate
Occupiers exterminate
Full stop to state adventurism
Eschew unilateralism
Reject rogue nation nihilism
No neocolonialism
Remove existing watchtower
Forgo the projectile shower
For morality to flower
it's Enter the Dragon power
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
raj
Sun, 2018-05-20 15:35
Hi OR
I liked the title which is appropriate for the theme of your poem...to me rhyme is not a comfort zone but you seem to thrive on them
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raj (sublime_ocean)
OriginalRhyku
Sun, 2018-05-20 19:12
Raj
For me, Rhyme Time Prime Clime. For some it's rhyme, for others it's reason, for a few neither rhyme nor reason. I would hope my offerings have both.
author commentchevyvent
Sun, 2018-05-20 17:55
Very Nice Thoughts
creativity with good intentions, "write from your heart, and you will make a diffence.." I like that- hope I can follow through on that good advice
Nice sentiments in this bitter-sweet write! Memories of loved ones linger on in nature's signs
I am privileged now to be able to sit and ponder on our veranda. It is where I get most inspiration, and this is inspirational. Thank you for sharing. God Bless.
Mario Vitale
OriginalRhyku
Sun, 2018-05-20 18:55
Mario
thanks for your opinions
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