Hi Barbara, I really enjoyed this. It transported me to a different place and there was a really quaint, ethereal sense to the writing. I also loved the small bits of insight into the persona (i.e., the line "I drift off until the dawn). The only constructive feedback I would offer would be that the line "perched atop crystal clear drink" seemed a little jarring to me, but this was a very small thing and may be due completely to the way I read it. The piece did speak to me, though, and is one of the better poems I have read as I just loved the feeling it gave. Thanks for the read, and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Nicholas.