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My love is like a flower
What enchantment lies
In the awakening of a flower!
Laughter or tears
It all throbs with love!
The whole meadow
Is carpeted with colour
And my heart beats
Like a trapped butterfly!
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Dandini
Tue, 2020-11-24 20:41
Thank you so much
Thank you so much
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Geezer
Wed, 2020-11-25 10:34
I agree...
whole-heartedly with Teddy. Very nice and truly romantic. I also agree with the suggestionmm of using the word flutter. Makes it sou nd more in keeping with a butterfly! Again, welcome to Neo. ~ Geezer.
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Dandini
Wed, 2020-11-25 11:03
A kind welcome.
A kind welcome.
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