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My First and Last Frosted Acrostic (Ed by raj methodology...)
L...ove is a lovely Luscious exotic word
O...nly lovers using it can really be Heard
V...ery often many Follow the lover true
E...choes are Heard all over the sea azure- blue
D...istance is no Limitation all this by now knew
L...overs of poetry on the Earth sadly are Minuscule
Y...ou all know it often Smile don't you
GOOD BYES ARE GOOD BYES
only @ TIMES
as I keep coming
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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scribbler
Fri, 2018-07-06 17:27
Hi loved
Not just an acrostic but a Rhyming acrostic. Way to get out of your comfort zone......stan
lovedly
Mon, 2018-07-09 14:10
MY
Thanks no more poems
rgds stan
author commentraj
Fri, 2018-07-06 17:37
Hi Lovedly
It's nice to see you getting yourself noticed by using your creative instinct seriously...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sat, 2018-07-07 23:20
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author commentlovedly
Fri, 2018-07-13 15:35
at times I wonder who
are those
I really know
thanks raj
of course
one is you
author commentraj
Fri, 2018-07-13 16:03
suggestion
if you insert a space after first alphabet of each line letters making up the acrostic will stand out. Other way is to make the first letters bold which is not easy here...for example:-
L ove is a lovely luscious exotic word
O nly lovers using it can be heard
V ery often many follow the lover too
E choes are heard all over the sea blue
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raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Fri, 2018-07-13 16:45
yes raj kind thanks
we have no system of making it bold
so I will your suggestion follow
grateful raj
author commentraj
Fri, 2018-07-13 16:51
do it Lovedly only if you
do it Lovedly only if you deem it fit. I only made a suggestion because I have seen others do it that way..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Fri, 2018-07-13 16:54
have a look
any better let me know
Ere you in Indiana now
Niagara me
author commentraj
Fri, 2018-07-13 17:03
I already looked and it
I already looked and it brings more clarity to the letters. Honestly though it's not my idea ..i made the suggestion because I have seen Acrostics presented that way..therefore no credit is due to me..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Fri, 2018-07-13 19:50
kindness and sharing of knowledge
is all that I profess
thanks raj see u more
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