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My favorite hat is a bottle top. [October Contest]
I wear an iridescent cape
Of oily feathers around my nape
And though every turn I seem to shine
One thing I cannot do is fly.
I also wear a translucent necklace
But as of late it leaves me breathless.
As I cannot breathe and cannot fly;
There is naught left to do but die.
My friend the fish his home is dead.
The bleached white corals where humans tread,
He seeks to live beyond their clutch.
But there’s nowhere humans haven’t touched.
My friend the turtles’ stomach is littered
With plastics, waste and so much glitter.
His likes to eat jellyfish, shrimp or greens
But sometimes the jellyfish aren’t what they seem.
Before man, we all lived content and undisturbed
But its all gone downhill since you ‘ruled’ the earth
Two fins good but two legs bad
We are just so tired of eating plastic bags.
Comments
raj
Sun, 2018-10-14 13:18
Hi Purple
I really liked this which is a vivid description of what has come to be and what the future holds for the next generation...nice language use...
i notice that you have checked the contest box but also suffix the title with [October Contest]....I think you are a strong contender...
best wishes..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
purple-hobbit
Sun, 2018-10-14 14:55
Thanks!
Thanks so much!!! And I have done now, thank you!
Not all those who wander are lost - JR Tolkien
- Tyjana :)
Rula
Sun, 2018-10-14 13:52
A specially fabulous
first stanza, but the whole poem has a fresh take that I really like.
Best wishes.
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purple-hobbit
Sun, 2018-10-14 14:55
Thank you!!! :) I'm glad you
Thank you!!! :) I'm glad you liked it!
Not all those who wander are lost - JR Tolkien
- Tyjana :)
Roscoe Lane
Sun, 2018-11-04 03:23
Liked,
Liked this poem very much, brutal and honest, ( as I cannot breathe and cannot fly, there is naught left to do but die, ) but also very sad. Love Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.