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My Favorite Book
I read it once and
some hundred times when
I was younger as
well as an adult.
A tale 'bout a witch
who-out of jealous-
offered a beauty
a poisoned apple
that sent her at once
to a longish nap.
Everyone there moaned and
grieved for the beauty's
mishap, everyone cried.
Till a passing prince
approached the sleeping
beauty with the kiss of life
to live happily after.
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A belated participation in March's Contest.
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Rula
Thu, 2020-04-09 11:12
Hello Jerry again
seems like there are different versions of my favorite "Sleeping Beauty" or at least what I still remember. :)
Really appreciate your kind visit.
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author commentRula
Sun, 2020-04-12 09:38
A valuable
add Jerry.
Always appreciate it.
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author commentRula
Fri, 2020-04-10 07:23
Hello Mark
so many thanks for your time and the kind visit.
Always happy to share, so just ticked the media box.
Thank you again.
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author commentGeezer
Fri, 2020-04-10 14:29
The Sleeping Princess...
and the handsome Prince are favorites of young ladies around the world, but I guess that little boys are not supposed to enjoy them? My oldest boy loved all those stories about Princes and Princesses when he was young. He dreamed of finding a Sleeping Beauty or Snow White to awaken and now that he is a man, he has achieved that very dream. He has awakened a Princess and hopefully will live happily forever after. Nice Job, Rula. ~ Geezer.
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Rula
Sun, 2020-04-12 09:25
Gee
Happy to know about your son having his princess. It is almost one of the hardest jobs nowadays. I thing boys and girls alike admire those fairy tales, or that what I think.
Appreciate your kind visit.
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author commentRula
Wed, 2020-04-15 16:28
Oh Mark
don't know how to thank you. Your efforts are really appreciated.
Thank you!
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author commentRula
Wed, 2020-04-15 16:25
Lol Jerry
I mean Shahriar.(Sultan) :)
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