This is a flowing, playful romp, with sparkling music and surprising images throughout.
I very much enjoyed it, thank you.

This is a fun write Raj - especially the second stanza. Interesting seeing things from a different point of view - rhyming was good in the second two stanza's - first stanza was free write. ( I'm guessing that was intentional. :)

Fun to read - fun to visualize! Made me laugh :)

Thanks for sharing!

Love Mand xxx

...stick to what you know best, whatever.
it reads like your life depended upon it, but you knew you were gonna be shot anyway, lol.

could do better, as me bastard head would say whilst punching me in the stomach.

eph x

if only for a moment.

eph x

It is one of my favorite among your poems so far.
The flow and the image made me feel inside the coffee mug.
I enjoyed your write very much, dear poet.

which you happen to be
I have observed ever so often
across the Internet
Go have coffee
at times you use words
too sexy
may be
unknowingly

you are dealing with the Western World
and
here all gals know
what are nuts
and
down on the knees
tc
the world is sexy
'''''''made me go down on my knees
so they won't hiss on my nuts''''
hiss or was it miss!!!
weak eyes
often misread