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MERRY XMAS neos all

When I come
my brains
become dumb

come mommy
where are thee
in the wildest
wilderness
looking out for me

Wait
I may soon
be coming
NUDELY
so you can recognize me
quite easily

longingly
me

your then small
sonny

now wow
me

mommy will ye

I'm coming
gleefully

mommyyeeeeeeeeeeeee

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
EACH XMAS IS DIFFERENT
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

think that you had already lost your marbles, Lovedly; I would say that you have now done so. LoL I'm guessing that if you had been female, the ending would have been; Daddyeeeeee? ~ Geez.
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Daddyeeeeeellleeee
u b geeeeeeellillyyyeeeee
lolllyyyyyylie

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