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Magic of Us

Let that Blackstreet ride from track five,
Do not play anything but Another Level;
Let me run the shower water to revive,
Undress you slowly with kisses so careful.

Sweetheart, let us make tonight magical...

I would like to turn off all the lights now
And this passionate walk with blind faith;
Kisses over you, unbutton your blouse,
Remove your bottom, embrace your waist.

Sweetheart, let us make tonight magical...

I feel it in you,
You feel it in me;
The magic of us
Feels so sweet.

Now, baby, take off what is my shirt,
Kiss over my neck and down my chest;
Kiss me tenderly to release all the hurt,
Put your hands in my boxers as blessed.

Sweetheart, let us make tonight beautiful...

Jump in the shower before it gets cold,
No need to look back, I am right behind you;
Ready to bathe your sexy body head to toe,
You can grab a handcloth and bathe me too.

Sweetheart, let us make tonight beautiful...

I feel it in you,
You feel it in me;
The magic of us
Feels so sweet.

Let me feel your thigh and pull you onto me,
Spread your legs, then put myself inside;
Start off slow, rubbing your lovely back gently,
And move to fistful of hair in the shower all night.

Sweetheart, let us make tonight special...

As the water gets cooler, we get more warm,
Together making love in the hot and cool showers;
Pull your hair back, to wrap you in your arms,
Now, going a little harder the past two hours.

Sweetheart, let us make tonight special...

I feel it in you,
You feel it in me;
The magic of us
Feels so sweet.

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Comments

of Liberty City? I'm a GTA fan too.

This is prose, while you do use some
poetic devices, rhyme and rhythm (which
are pretty good by the way), the content is
more a letter.

I was both born and raised in Liberty City of Miami, Florida. I am not so much of a gamer unless I am playing with my sons, but I appreciate the curiosity. In fact, I have Liberty City tattooed on my back from shoulder to shoulder in bulk cursive black ink. Yes, I agree... it does seem like a love letter huh? You do have eye for great editorial work. That is phenomenal. Thank you for your commentaries.

V/R,
Lamar of Liberty City

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