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Across the Internet …I daily come across …many guys in search of love…. expressing their desires in the lurch …hoping someone will read them …and find a lovely girl …one of their choosing …for them…. they wonder aimlessly …some in stark nudity… others a bit too shy …. they call themselves a guy ….I wonder why…..

If you can’t get a girl down your …home and town and living lane …or college, school …. to be simple and plain …someone you can see and follow and know face to face…how you would find one out here in Neo …writing poetry only …
It dazzles me … yes as to why you are wandering …in the surfs of paradise …when decision of a desired Valentine in your minds …you do hide. …
I had the Valentine of my years since eons past … go guys lover boys …. find one for yourself a gal …you love and fast...ere the snowfalls and you too experience a fall…

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Hello, Lovedly,
This is visually eye-catching, verbally fun to read, and simply so good! What great wisdom you pass along! As usual, I am always drawn to one or two lines in your poetry that resonate:
"...ere the snowfalls and you too experience a fall..." You know it well. This is a gem.
Thank you!

I always consider my readers as GEMS This one was composed in 2014 when most of us had a fall 'neath the NIAGARA FALL Maiden LOL

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Romantic Niagara Falls!
I understand!

I just composed one on rainfall you'd have to wait till tomorrow Hold on that guy wanted me to see rain falling lol

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