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lovely rosy

lovely roses

we all love roses
both when alive
and
when we die,
we take their perfume along
and
those left behind,
place roses in pages of books
as bookmarks
for the end of time ...
when newer generations
repeat the same story of love
we all have
and
had in mind ...
roses are for ever
dear friends…
of mine

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'those left behind,
place roses in pages of books
as bookmarks
for the end of time ...'

love it loved
hugs
judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

now I know
only two sincere folks love me
one is you
and the other one is
Dear Sadie's

WE ALL KNOW HIMMMMM

loved

author comment

I have a couple of roses in laminate and as page fillers, love your piece on these things. Yes I am part of Sadie's world yet have a few things to do before I leave. I wonder what I should Pack for the journey, I think I know I shall pack just love and a great respect for all, they should keep me safe for ever.. Take care young Bard we are but a thought away, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

pack a perfume of my love and affection

take along with you my sense of humour and emotion and leave behind a bunch of roses in the library of time and let all Neopoets view it from time to time and as you smile from beyond don't ponder but in Sadie's fiefdom fearlessly wander and love amongst heavenly folks squander if you still have some left up your sleeve still i wonder...

loved

author comment

pack a perfume of my love and affection

take along with you
my sense of humour and emotion
and
leave behind a bunch of roses,
in the library of time
and
let all Neopoets view it
from time to time
and
as you smile from beyond,
don't ponder
but in Sadie's fiefdom fearlessly wander
and
love amongst heavenly,
ethereal
folks squander,
if you have some left up your sleeve
still I wonder...

loved

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