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LOVELY CEMENTED FORESTS

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2019-02-27 12:15

Forests of cement
if there is any beauty
between
Cement and Forest
and
any Love between
man and woman
'tis here
on mommy
Earth

let all the waters
not wash it away
Love is very dear
very costly
here
part of mother
Earth

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Thu, 2019-02-28 07:20

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the 'cement forest' expression, but I couldn't find its connection to love

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lovedly

Thu, 2019-02-28 09:32

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sets in senility
so grant it
Rula

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Cloudthings

Fri, 2019-03-01 02:05

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For me it felt like a seeking of goodness (love) in what we have before us, be it natural or even hideous concrete. I really enjoyed it, in simple warm & amicable poetry. Lovely.

Cheers
Anni

My dear friend always told me "Water the seeds of joy first"

lovedly

Fri, 2019-03-01 02:14

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you put life into my ''cement'' thanks
above the clouds

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