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Loop Poetry

I always wanted to write a sonnet
Sonnet of every poet
Poet that has a trustful pen
Pen that speaks of all Men
Men who care for true emotions
Emotions that make the difference
Difference that makes us humans

My sonnet bloomed a fruitful tree
Tree that later called Poetry
Poetry of every color
Colors that paint with hope
Hope that paints almost everything
Everything that touches humans.

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Just wanted to try my hand at another form of poetry. Hope you enjoy it.
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Gee has started the theme
may see his
on my poem
Rula
ma'am

Hello, Rula!
Very clever form and wonderful theme and language. I wonder...is it necessary to include "a" and "the" at the beginning of the sentences? It seems this particular form would forgive that formality. I very much like this, and appreciate learning about it. May give it a shot myself, soon!
Thank you, Rula!
L

You are totally right. Done as suggested.
How do you like the addition.
A very fun form. You can infinitely play with it.
Appreciate your priceless visit dear.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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This is wonderful!
L

I always wanted to write a sonnet,
sonnet of every poet,
poet x(that)x who has a trustful pen,
pen that speaks of all {the}x men,
men who care for true emotions,
emotions that make the difference,
difference that makes us humans.

just imagine

Thank you, your suggestions taken.
Much appreciation.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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but for colurs
plural
a sight deviation which um ay correct
Rula

Your words inflame my muse. Can't thank you enough dear for your kind visit

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Follow me
www.instgram.com/rularules1

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