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Loop Poetry

I always wanted to write a sonnet
Sonnet of every poet
Poet that has a trustful pen
Pen that speaks of all Men
Men who care for true emotions
Emotions that make the difference
Difference that makes us humans

My sonnet bloomed a fruitful tree
Tree that later called Poetry
Poetry of every color
Colors that paint with hope
Hope that paints almost everything
Everything that touches humans.

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Just wanted to try my hand at another form of poetry. Hope you enjoy it.
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Gee has started the theme
may see his
on my poem
Rula
ma'am

Hello, Rula!
Very clever form and wonderful theme and language. I wonder...is it necessary to include "a" and "the" at the beginning of the sentences? It seems this particular form would forgive that formality. I very much like this, and appreciate learning about it. May give it a shot myself, soon!
Thank you, Rula!
L

You are totally right. Done as suggested.
How do you like the addition.
A very fun form. You can infinitely play with it.
Appreciate your priceless visit dear.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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This is wonderful!
L

I always wanted to write a sonnet,
sonnet of every poet,
poet x(that)x who has a trustful pen,
pen that speaks of all {the}x men,
men who care for true emotions,
emotions that make the difference,
difference that makes us humans.

just imagine

Thank you, your suggestions taken.
Much appreciation.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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but for colurs
plural
a sight deviation which um ay correct
Rula

I just love the theme, and your word choice makes this so beautiful. Another great write from Rula, who's flames are burning bright.

Thank you...Teddy

Your words inflame my muse. Can't thank you enough dear for your kind visit

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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