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Loop Poetry
I always wanted to write a sonnet
Sonnet of every poet
Poet that has a trustful pen
Pen that speaks of all Men
Men who care for true emotions
Emotions that make the difference
Difference that makes us humans
My sonnet bloomed a fruitful tree
Tree that later called Poetry
Poetry of every color
Colors that paint with hope
Hope that paints almost everything
Everything that touches humans.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Just wanted to try my hand at another form of poetry.
Hope you enjoy it.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2021-01-18 18:33
you may start with me
Gee has started the theme
may see his
on my poem
Rula
ma'am
Lavender
Mon, 2021-01-18 19:05
Loop Poetry
Hello, Rula!
Very clever form and wonderful theme and language. I wonder...is it necessary to include "a" and "the" at the beginning of the sentences? It seems this particular form would forgive that formality. I very much like this, and appreciate learning about it. May give it a shot myself, soon!
Thank you, Rula!
L
Rula
Tue, 2021-01-19 03:08
Thank you dear Lavender
You are totally right. Done as suggested.
How do you like the addition.
A very fun form. You can infinitely play with it.
Appreciate your priceless visit dear.
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Lavender
Tue, 2021-01-19 16:50
Oh, Rula!
This is wonderful!
L
lovedly
Mon, 2021-01-18 21:03
Revised after Lave silently advised
I always wanted to write a sonnet,
sonnet of every poet,
poet x(that)x who has a trustful pen,
pen that speaks of all {the}x men,
men who care for true emotions,
emotions that make the difference,
difference that makes us humans.
just imagine
Rula
Tue, 2021-01-19 03:05
Hello Lovedly
Thank you, your suggestions taken.
Much appreciation.
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lovedly
Tue, 2021-01-19 10:06
I c the modifications and additional para
but for colurs
plural
a sight deviation which um ay correct
Rula
Rula
Tue, 2021-01-19 04:18
Teddy my dear
Your words inflame my muse. Can't thank you enough dear for your kind visit
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