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Lindame

Opals strung nightly
Across evenings jet skies,
Sparkles of her voice.

 

 

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Last few words: 
Haiku form
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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and a warm welcome to Neopoet.
A very fine haiku to start with. It has a wonderful imagery.
You've done great with just few words which is not always easy.
Looking for more of your works.

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Thanks for the welcome. I love haiku. Been writing for many years learning forms etc.. I prefer concise poetry, it's more my style I think.

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Ahahaa thanks a lot Muse!

author comment

Hi Lindame and welcome to Neopoets. Lovely haiku, the images are perfect. Don't you mean "evening's"? Just a small nit.
All the best, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

and this fits the traditional style, Very nice and strong solid thought.
~ Geezer.
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