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This.
And that you love me.
Even just that you are.

That you see softness and then it is.
That you lay down and I sleep.
That you are happy and so, I am.

You are.
And that you love me.
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Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

I think this poem is unique. I like the language. I do feel that is unfinished. Perhaps this work has something more to say..?

Shyanne

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I don't feel the ring of truth in this poem.

There is some depth missing. Only you can tell us what it is.

cheers,
Jess
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