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LIGHT CANDLES FOR SILENCE AND PEACE

You surely have discerning eyes
A CANDLE OR MANY CANDLES
we lit to commemorate
our pets final eternal move to the unknown moon

all is over
our pet had been blessed by lovely folks
even though his stay was briefer than brief

May FLASHY
now Rest in Peace
eternally beyond eternity

god bless him spiritually
he was more human
than any human could be

wish you could have him seen
an angel was
FLASHY

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Free verse
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Last few words: 
REST IN PEACE NOW ETERNALLY
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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for your loss. ~ Geez.
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My chatroom is taking a break
if you have ideas about times that
are convenient and subjects
to talk about, contact me and we can discuss it
Thank you for your participation.
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It has been a great personal loss for me
lonely as I be
now he rests in
PEACE

author comment

Hello, Lovedly,
Tender homage. My condolences.
L

everyone's life is
good bad or sad

the finale is
you light candles today

some one will for you
some day
if love is your
lively way
thanks for coming
our way

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