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licking the flames

Enlisting the charms
of the fire,
in wistful music
I spoke from the lyre

Entrancing the beckoning
to his knees,
this bubbling lust
is slightly freed

A trail of whisper
licks my ear,
drawing me close
to hold me near

Touching a rose
tips the peaks,
a burgeoning lust
is lightly tweaked

Unbuttoning need
in frenzied grasps,
ripping to free
a stubborn clasp

Fumbling fingers
brush and bump,
grinding of hips
begins the thump

Parting the thighs
that flamed the ache,
speared in the fire
that ripple’s to wake

Licking the ether
lining the why,
turning to jelly
lost in your eyes

A silent scream
in nature is heard,
as Ecstasy feeds
I fly like a bird

Peeling the layers
that shaded the orbs,
discovering bliss
as your taste is absorbed

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passionate write enjoyed

very glad you liked it much appreciated

sincerely JC

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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A passionate write, I am now going outside as it's bloody freezing out there just to clear the mind.
Is there any of this stuff on "E" Bay,
LOL, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

LMFAO !! haha seems you liked it thanks for the read and the comment and NO there is nothing of this stuff on Ebay

love always JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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I'll comment after taking a cold shower lol. Erotic without being pornographic.............stan

You lost out again, the original had video coverage not much else LOL.
You'll just have to get to comment faster, Yours Ian . T. He He He

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

rotflmfao !! Ian bad bad boy hahahahaha cracked me up I needed a good laugh

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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It would be getting cold over there I would stay away from the cold showers ... thanks for the read and the comment its always appreciated

sincerely JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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Phew.

And I thought that I wrote good erotic poetry.

Not a thing to criticize...just a deep bow of homage.

Most excellent.

And, he is most lucky.

heehee.

Respectfully, Jim

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

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I have a lot of erotic poetry I havent posted yet not all rhyming some are free verse I will start posting a few every now and then I have a couple that are finished

very happy you liked this one I am chuffed

with love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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lost in your (his) eyes
since later its
as your taste is absorbed

well yes its sexy, in a nice way, and some good lines

I have already changed it thank you for the heads up
I didnt notice it and tense's are something I try to check

thanks for the encouraging comment

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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