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learners poem

Nice words
Keep them coming
You have a heart
of a poet's inkling

Speak not of miseries
there are plenty
speak of happiness
as sufferings
are many

Many folks....
they need your positive messages
if any

Love and life are virtues to flow
that none or very few know
all that is....

We should feel happy
with what we have
what we don't
forget it.....

Greed is the biggest misery!!!!
by man made

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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A good write, but don't forget we have a fertile imagination so in our poetry we can portray everything, there is, was or will ever be, plus the myths of history or made up from a mind that goes on a rampage throwing words out.
We are not evolved enough and maybe never will be to be able to write of just good things.
I liked this good part though, don't forget the comment side to show that a piece has been read..
Take care young Bard and know we are here with you,
Yours Ian..

Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

on whom I lean also
I think its essential for any poet
to be read
to assure one
that one is a poet

hope all poets will know

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