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Learn damn it

How can you feel these things I feel?
I am me, and the only one of me.
Each of us is unique in many things
Even Identical twins their own ways

If I am hurting just hold me
Not with your hands you clumsy beast
Hold me with your thoughts
Only those can be the same

If you tell me, I will not listen
I hold my own council in here
It has never let me down
What! Yours has let you drift

Damn! Do I have to tell you again?
Just get off my case, I could be insane
No I am fine, just stressed at your talk
I told you to just think, of my needs.

That’s better you are learning fast
I hear your thoughts alone at last
Now you can move away from me
I can hear you in my own eternity..

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With thoughts. Lovely concept but all of us lack understanding of others because we can never walk in their shoes

Thank you for your visit and reply, I was probably stating a fact when writing this but just wrote it anyway lol,
Thanks again, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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Someone that should listen to good counsel
Is not listening or maybe can't hear for the noise
In their heads

A different write from you its great to see
you exploring in words/worlds smile

Love always Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

This was a write out of boredom lol just wanted to put something on stream, could have put one of my old ones but wrote this instaed.
Thanks for your visit you are always so welcome to pop in to talk, Yours as always, Ian x

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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Each of us is unique....

thank the Lord we are not made
in a single factory
what of genes you say Google and you will find
how differently genes
from x and y chromosomes choose
even in case of twins
identical or not
twins can be two different sperms
and
two tiny eggs

loved

Yes the difference twix us all is great to see, we train our brains to sort out things during our lives , not sure where the differing Intelligence comes in as our IQ is supposed not to change, though circumstances do have a tendency to dictate our final level or resting place.
I am a great believer in the point of applied intelligence that is the one that matters, if you cant apply it you ain't lol.
Thanks for popping in young Bard, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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