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Killer Queen (Tribute To Freddie Mercury )

Each of us has been given a special gift in life.
Part of being human is we make mistakes.
Yet we don't let the mistakes dictate the path that we are to tread upon
Poetic free verse provides a format to be voiced by the poet in a very positive way.
It allows growth in the character for the true writer at hand.
Having written so far several poems on their site
I'm forever humbled to be connected to such a venue with talent to abound.
His presence took us a way,
Far from tie your mother down..,
Freddie we love you still
I want to ride my bicycle
Crystal clear in this think called love
From the childhood to adulthood
I’ve never got bored of the voice,
Like people have coffee to start their day,
I have your voice, I need it,
In my own way

one lock the door..,
cause love won't leave you alone
He wants to break free

From the different voice rages you could do,
From rock, punk, opera, heavy metal and pop,
No-one could sing like you, no-one
You have the power to sing,
A make something in every song.
You are my inspiration to write,
My thoughts and words who I want to be,
Some people think it’s weird,
But Freddie you are special,
To me.

You’ve made the whole world happy,
An forever people still think of you,
From all different ages,
People still love you,
Only because you are Freddie Mercury

Thank you for the unique opportunity to convey my work to the mass populace
Exquisite taste permeates through the lens of this on site opportunity.
Talent can't be compromised but shown to everyone who loves and embraces the true art of writing.
Lastly critical insight is achieved by listening attentively to the positive feedback we receive from our writings.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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interesting flow of consciousness
it did not explain to me why do you like Freddie Mercury


I always liked him, from his work on the film Metropolis to his concerts with Monsarrat Caballe, the great Spanish Soprano. Queen was the generation or two after me, I just missed it... I have not yet seen the recent film, but I will. Many people mention him as a big influence.

I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

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