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Just a Thought

There's a poem
in everyone's bag
that speaks of dreams,
wishes and prayers,

Release it.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
Just a thought...
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Thank you for reading and sharing your priceless thoughts. The title just reflects the idea that this is not in any way a poem, or _this is what I thought_ but I'll spare your title for sth that is more wise in the future to deserve it.
Now the ending, mmmm, are you saying that the word release is not properly used?

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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The world is an ocean of poems and we must draw from it.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

Always great to get a new friend reading my words.
Always appreciated.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Hi, Rula,
Calming. Soothing. Affirmative. Very zen. I rather like the last line as it is...a very peaceful, slow and deliberate release.
Thank you,
L

Your commrnts really bring happiness up to my home.
All the respect dear sweet friend.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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As Lavender said, this was very relaxing and soothing to read, and I liked the flow! Great work. :)

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As I said, always appreciate getting new audience to read my words. I feel lucky to have you all, really.
Thank you so much

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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