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Joy [Runic Symbol:Wunjo]
J o y is whelming of the heart, rousing goosebumps, beaming in a smile; as buoyant as the first kiss blushing a maiden's cheeks...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage:
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Comments
Rula
Tue, 2018-08-14 11:31
Raj
Thank you. This is absolutely an enjoyable read. It put a wide smile as I was reading through. ;-)^_^
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raj
Tue, 2018-08-14 14:04
Rula
when you said reading through made you smile...it is a complement which is satisfying...i am trying to guess which portion of the line made you smile...perhaps something you could relate to )
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Wed, 2018-08-15 14:17
it is worth a smile
but r u attempting to say all in a single line
or classifying what joy is
please salvage my mind raj
long time no sea
raj
Wed, 2018-08-15 14:23
though there is always a lot
though there is always a lot more to write about.....i am trying a hand at concizing to the best possible extent...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Wed, 2018-08-15 14:34
great then raj
help me concise my FALLS POEM JUST POSTED ..Will edit to include politicians as i skipped
over their fall