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It's A Miracle...

I thought the word was marvelous
and so, I wrote it down
Then I looked to see
and the word was really miraculous
Now, what do I do?
I just change the word I thought was marvelous
to make it miraculous
and send it right off to you.

Now, before I send it this time
I will check to make quite sure
that it really is miraculous
and not marvelous
so, I can change it before I do

I mean wouldn't it be a joke
if in between a few tokes
that the word was marvelously
turned into a miracle
and the word was miraculous?

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

The word 'listen' contains the same letters as the word 'silent'.
Your words are very much sounding the same.
Clever poem, Geezer,
Mark

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I am a caveman
Drawing bovine on a wall
With a burned spear tip
(for Jess)

it's a pleasure to do something, that requires a little thinking for a change. ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

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What a fun poem! I love the interchanging of marvelous and miraculous. Made for a very lighthearted well written piece.

~RoseBlack~

things up a bit. I had fun with it, and I am delighted that I made somebody laugh. ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

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