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Indirect imagery (imagery workshop)

The peace in pieces, deathly silence.

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Still, I have an example only. Where is my explanation. I am a verbal learner, not a sight one. I need explanations.

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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and this just occurred to me. I saw an abandoned battlefield, replete with corpses and smoking ruins.

cheers,
Jess
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peace in pieces can refer to everything from a slight argument to full out war with all which they might entail.

The day after that Christmas day during WW1, when they all played football together..

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