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Incredibly Credible ..... MY LIVE EXPERIENCE

The doc had warned me
notwithstanding other health problems
I'd suffer a Heart attack
I could hear it quite clear
was it just a warning

A year and half lapsed
I did not collapse
but one can't take chances
in such advance warning situations

A day gone since yesterday
I was enjoying music and seeing auditions on my cell

When I wanted to do
well you know what to do
my left shoulder suddenly did boulder

My heart protruded
like a conical hard stone raw mango
it was paining but not excruciatingly
as is expected

I hit my heart very hard
banged it like one does an iron
with a sledge hammer
the protruding outwardly vanished
I managed to resume my heart

believe or not this happened

No time was lost in the art
as I got up as a kid smart

Was it it
or my smartness that saved me
who can tell
None perhaps

I am now again as well as before
despite my age
believe it or not
(NO LOL)

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
INCREDIBLY CREDIBLE DID TACTUALLY PASS
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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I'm not sure that I know what it was that you wanted to do, but evidently, it puts a strain on one's heart. Be careful with that! I think it could lead to blindness. Lol
I believe it! ~ Geez.
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WASHROOM REAL VISUAL
LOL

NO JOKES

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