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Incantations of Seduction

I felt your hand
 bunched
  in Egyptian cotton,
   unbinding
    a day’s inhibitions
     fabric curtained
      and fell, with it
       restraint
floated away

you come within
 fingers of breath
  from my lips,
   a tongue’s touch
    of bare tips
     stroking desire
      the scent of your lust,
overwhelms

a bead of desire,
 pooled to the corner
  of my mouth,
   I could smell in you
    musk and oak
     wafting
      on invisible
       incantations
        pulsing the air,
         you smelt so good
I could have eaten you

         as I did,
       your desire
     unleashed 

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

love passionate write the 1st verse is my fave much enjoyed cheers x

I am still working on this one but its getting close
I'm very happy you liked this one

Hugs Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

author comment

What you trying to do to us Oldies LOL????????
Cold showers in Winter are not on LOL
Is this a concrete poem or did it just fall that way, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

It just kind of fell that way I guess it could be a concrete poem ..

Lol no cold showers in the winter brrrrrr

Glad it hit the mark

Lobe always Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

author comment

all men follow some silent footsteps till last days
if this site had
had the number
who have read
then this one
would head
the list ,
alas no one listens
who damn cares
how many have read
but a poets heart it enlightens..
those who say else-wise need simply to be forgotten

does this look like a ccc CAPS CCC

loved

I am happy if they are read
Doesn't matter the quantity
It's the quality that counts

Smiles

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

author comment

how do I manufacture
QUALITY
just tell me

guide me
advise
or
rap
if you please

loved

the poem never leaves the mind
it stays there until it must be written
then it forms into "something"
then that something has substance

the substance becomes theme
then all the hard work starts
editing and reediting until
it becomes a poem or
something resembling a poem

love Jayne-Chloe xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

author comment

Natty placing of you poem dear Jayne,

You start with the unbinding
of the Egyptian mummy,
the awakening of the libido to life,
unable to resisit,
the breath of the fingers,
and the odours of the body,

(that my father said were infinitely
more attractive than all oher perfumes,)

What a meal,
although I'm not sure it is enhanced by the lay out.

Love Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

Thanks for the honesty Ann I am still not sure of the layout I will take a look I may change it or take it back to standard ,,, very glad you liked this one

love and hugs JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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