There are those that will like your lack of command
in English and those that will try to help you become
more proficient. I will attempt to help you become better
at English and keep the charm of your origin.

At first, I thought to tell you to delete the:

will love me, will need me, for me, but realized that
would diminish the effect of it.

When my morning first wakes, is not the way that I would express this idea.
I would say "When I awake each morning, you are my first thought."

I understand that you may have been the one who made the first move,
but I don't think that it has any bearing here. I would simply say
that "I accepted you with all my heart."

I'm not sure of what you mean by: "in a garden of sweet remains"
Did you meet in a cemetery, at a funeral?

"You steal my heart from a mountain high"
Is there some signifigant meaning here? Are you or she royalty?

1] But as days [go] by.
2] what does [glist] mean?
3] In a minute passed near to you. [ I think that this is an attempt to combine two thoughts]
[that you had passed near to her and you smiled at her.

You express the thought; that you had hopes that your attraction would bear fruit
and you would have a romantic relationship, but when she ignored you, you fumed
and thought that "It's okay, I will find someone who is not fickle or false and
will love me for who I am.

So, I think you will have to keep trying to make this poem better
by taking some of the things I said and rearranging your words to give this
a bit more smoother feel. Answer some of these questions the best you can
and we shall try again. ~ Geezer.
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