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I Wonder

The pattern
of seashells

The silence
of deer

The feelings
of trees

The scent
of cinnamon

The color
of your eyes.

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Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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When I wrote this, I felt it was someone imagining meeting a new lover - but it also reminded me of many of my thoughts when I was expecting the birth of my children. Much to ponder in life!
Thank you!
L

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Beautiful. Nuf said.

Thank you very much for reading and your kind comment!
Appreciated!
Lavender

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if it speaks oceanic
within one autumn leaf
urs is
'tis

just by the way
my eyes are
cynosure

As always, thank you very much!
L

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The hope of meeting someone new, ah those were the days. It's not like that now due to the use of masks and social distance but I am sure in time it will be once again. Your ending packed the punch.

Thank you...Teddy

(Thought I responded earlier today. Not certain where my first attempt may have found itself. ???)
I share your hope that masks and social distancing will fade away - sooner than later, but safely for sure. Thank you for reading! I am always grateful when you stop by.
L

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You are too funny... So, is your puppy wearing a Super Hero costume?!
L

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your poem just sent my mind in motion the simplicity of this work is just beautiful loved it

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Life is full of endless things to wonder about. Thank you for your lovely comments.
L

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