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I am

Unscathed by decisions made
Knowing no one will relate
How I behave is the effect
Subliminal silence
Tattoos. Artistic dialect
Chemical vibrance
As I place pieces of my soul
Into poems untold
Hidden behind what I reap
I've sown an impression of deep

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage: 


I agree with Beau, but I can feel/like the remoteness in your poetry voice,. There is a raw kick here as well - an internal defense mechanism to protect yourself, maybe? Sounds rebellious and hurt. Take care of yourself. And I agree about darkness - dark can be a great place to visit - a place of imagination and solace.

Jenifer Jaspa James

but I loved it . short and to the point. Thank you

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