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I’m not Blind

I am not blind
But colour blind,
My hearts’
Not red,
I’m told it’s white
Red hot...
That's how I live
So ever happily

Let love be blind
But under the sheets
No lights are needed...

Tis the warmth of the hearth
The length and breadth
That we value most
You love me
I’d love to toast.

So is loves divinity
A gift of eternity
Where’s the need
Of anothers invasion,
When love and lust
Can be the very most
Satisfying equation

Ah! Cause of
A loveliest final incision
As two merge
With one another
Arrives a younger

Yours must just rise
Then you will
Even if you
Really are blind
See love
With your third eye
Under the blinds...
If you really have one

Style / type: 
Free verse
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i love it! it flows, the theme is consistent, and very well worded.

for your maiden visit
TO all of you..


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