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Painful in heart
so much to say,
yet when it snows
in depth,
defy is all that knows.

Blood will bleed,
tears it shall feed.
Run we run,
so simple yet
in truth all we have
is our fears.

Human spirit we try
cold mornings we fail.
It is here our soul bleeds.
It is here an old man feels the wind.
It is here the world feeds.

A thousand words one,
one action,
Love in an instant,
tears in a moment.
In spirit we try
but the world blinks
and we forget how to fly.

On my knees today
this old man,
will sit in solitude and pray.
For the angel that cried,
the angel bound
for two hearts were lost and found.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words: 
too long since pen and paper met. very rough idea, like it that way...
Editing stage: 


Your poetry has been sparse for the last two years, though you have received great comments from all that have commented on them.
This site is a little short when it comes to comments, but I must say that you must interact with the rest of Neopoet to receive a flow.
Your poetry is good and you would benefit from interacting with others.
This piece is what I would call quite nice, I would love to see more of your work here, as that most times determines the way we look at the flow of Ideas from you and your feelings .
Have a great season out there, though I noticed some place you are busy 24/7 writing will give you a break,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Thank you.
I appreciate the valid comment and true you are.
I shall post more frequently and join the community. it has been awhile and its time to
to put pen on paper again.

Zane godfrey

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