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howl at the moon
my dear,
howl at the moon
like a madman
in a cage
rip fragile clothes
from silken skin
and waltz
my darling,
laugh for nothing
but reasons
in the dust
for dust is but dust
when shown to the wind
my lover,
turn to me
let air
fill your lungs
and scream for me
for i wish not
to be
but those
who cannot speak
without smiling
so smile
leaving crows feet
at the door
and run my dear
run throughout the night
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raj
Wed, 2015-03-18 13:21
Hello
I believe there is some abstract in your poem, but i missed it...would be glad to know what exactly you wish to communicate besides the heart calls....or is it about some broken relationship....hard to guess..
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)