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HOPING

If you’re hoping,
that your dreams come true
You’re dreaming about,
what you’d like to do
But it’s a mere illusion,
wishing in your sleep
A dream, that once awake,
you’re hoping you can keep
WIZDUMBs by JA 737

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open your eyes,
shower, coffee, get dressed,
go to work
hate it
hate most of them there
come home,
write a poem
but never, ever
stop dreaming.

I like this, Ja Ja, but you're a poet. You can keep the dreams happening. Illusion, delusion, hope or nightmare. It's all in your capabilities.

cheers,
Jess
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