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Hope and peace

The cold and bitterness of winter tarries,
Hinders in our memory,
But the light of spring will be radiant,
As there is always hope and faith.

Hope is powerful,
More powerful than any conflict or demise,
If there hope to be felt,
The spring will come more soon.

The bitterness of unfairness and unevenness,
Can be quite dreadful and hinder,
But hope can be stronger,
And soon the bright outburst of light,
Lights up the brilliant future.

All that is gold and wealth,
Does not have to glitter,
There are things in this world that wealth cannot fulfill,
But with hope and faith, there can be more.

Dreadful things happen to us all,
They tarry and hinder for long in our memory,
But that is why we do not quit,
As there is a victory to come.

Victory does not come easily,
But there is a true way to do it,
We do not hinder in fighting,
As the effort does not be wasted.

When there’s a will there’s a way,
That old saying goes,
As we can fight with courage,
Strong as we go.

Desperate situations we are in,
But there is a light to be seen,
Turn on the light,
As the world will fill with light.

People don’t realize their mistakes,
Only when it’s too late,
But it fine to make mistakes,
If everyone works to fix it up.

We can stop fighting,
Quarreling over worthless things,
As fighting will make situations worse,
We can make quiet.

When hope is strong,
When the world comes together for one purpose,
We can march to victory,
In the bright, bright future.

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