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Hike Coup:

Up the steep incline
Trudging a trail serpentine
View from peak divine

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Pretty neat. Yes, I have seen and been through many serpentines.

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Trekking has given a benign connotation to the expression "take a hike". Fresh air, beautiful scenery and a feeling of accomplishment, elation and contemplative contentment - what's not to like.

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Good one!

Alid

Through this Rhyku, I have attempted to make a molehill out of a mountain - reducing the long and arduous journey uphill into three short parts. Thanks.

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