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Health of State:

Slowness endemic
Corruption is systemic
State epidemic

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Two third world nations being pitted against each other by alien special interests for their own nefarious purposes and on a mindless spending spree on offensive WMD and armaments need to be reminded that the people elected them to take care of improving the lives of its citizens many of them still eking out a hand to mouth existence. The leadership composed of militant rogues and scoundrels enriching themselves, their families and their allies at the expense of the South Asian people. 2019 will bring an end to one set of scoundrels and lead to a representative, moral government that is answerable to the people not to alien masters.
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